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Re: [Merge] lp:~johill-lanl/epics-base/ca-ref-man-maint into lp:epics-base |
From: |
Ralph Lange <[email protected]> |
To: |
Jeff Hill <[email protected]> |
Date: |
Wed, 16 Mar 2011 17:08:28 -0000 |
Review: Needs Fixing
In a lot of places, apostrophes (') are replaced by a right-single-quote character (’). This is wrong, as an apostophe is syntactically and semantically a different character than a single quote. (See http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apostrophe for details.)
In line 2530, the − should be a &endash;.
In line 2884, the <span style="font-style: italic;"></span> should rather be be <em></em>.
In line 2884, last paragraph: "it's" -> "its", add a comma after "set to false".
Both "nil" and "nill" seem to be used in the document for a null pointer. Maybe straighten that out globally.
Apart from that, the changes look fine to me.
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