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Subject: Re: [Merge] lp:~johill-lanl/epics-base/ca-ref-man-maint into lp:epics-base
From: Ralph Lange <Ralph.Lange@gmx.de>
To: Jeff Hill <johill@lanl.gov>
Date: Wed, 16 Mar 2011 17:08:28 -0000
Review: Needs Fixing
In a lot of places, apostrophes (') are replaced by a right-single-quote character (&rsquo;). This is wrong, as an apostophe is syntactically and semantically a different character than a single quote. (See http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apostrophe for details.)

In line 2530, the &minus; should be a &endash;.

In line 2884, the <span style="font-style: italic;"></span> should rather be be <em></em>.

In line 2884, last paragraph: "it's" -> "its", add a comma after "set to false".

Both "nil" and "nill" seem to be used in the document for a null pointer. Maybe straighten that out globally.

Apart from that, the changes look fine to me.
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